WHY WHY WHY!? That first panel is painfully unfinished, The sudden revert to black and white doesn't work, the grey tones aren't used well here at all, and it feels like the page is only half written.
This was. I had a lot of enthusiasm for the flashback when I first thought of it. I had some great ideas for what it would lead into, but... I just kept reaching this parts where I couldn't draw it. It's painful reading these.
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